Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Question #1 
Prompt: Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (this could be a book, movie, or an activity or experience at work, home, or school) that has been particularly meaningful to you. 



       "If you know what you want, then you go and you find it and you get it." This quote from the Broadway musical, "Into The Woods," has shaped my life, starting from the first moment I stepped foot center stage as a young preschooler. From that moment, musical theatre had begun to underline my entire being, and constantly prove to be the one, consistent aspect I could depend on. However, a talent in performing, once the only skill I wished to obtain from pursuing musical theatre, soon became merely a secondary ability to the lifelong lessons theater would teach me.
       Although music surrounded me since before I could even speak, musical theatre wove itself into my life in the summer of 2005, when I was lucky enough to be granted the opportunity to attend French Woods Festival of the Performing Arts. French Woods lifted me from my small pond of elementary school class plays and dumped me into a terrifying ocean of highly trained actors, dedicated professionals, and most of all, rejections. I was struck with shock and disbelief when I first caught glimpse of my name listed under the ensemble of a cast list. Never before have I needed to work towards my success. My blatant surprise quickly blurred to a confused fury, but was immediately replaced with an enduring determination. A determination to enhance my talents until I was the best that I could be. A determination to prove to everyone that I was destined for success. This indefatigable determination instilled in me at the innocent age of twelve still drives me today; however, this persistence not only fuels my performance as an actor or singer, but my performance as an athlete, a student, and a friend.
       Musical theatre also exposed an infallible confidence in which I never expected to see emerge from myself. As a painfully awkward and introverted young teenager, self confidence was especially difficult for me to develop. I constantly faced insults and discouragement from my lonely middle school hallways and from my own mind, which eventually caused me to leave the school I was attending. During this terrifying time in which I felt completely abandoned, I turned to my passion to guide me through this antagonistic time. Finding my voice again and continuously performing was the solitary reason I started to believe in myself once again. Hearing applause at the end of a performance in which I worked hours to perfect, or after portraying a character I analyzed and developed to the best of my abilities brought an indescribable wave of confidence and self esteem; a feeling of which I am unable to properly put into words. This confidence helped me believe that I could achieve anything I put my mind to, and still directs me through trivial times today.
       Although to some, musical theatre may seem like a simple hobby that involves the ability to sing high notes or to cry on command, theatre means much more than that to me. Theatre has been my outlet for as long as I remember, and I know it will continue to guide me for the rest of my life. Because of the valuable and cherished lessons this undying passion has taught me, I am a better person. I am a determined person. I am driven. I am successful. I am strong. I am confident. I am a performer, and I am thankful.

4 comments:

  1. Molly:)
    Knowing you for so long now, this essay really tells me how important theatre is to you. When you used to tell me about going to camp, I never really understood why you enjoyed it so much, but now I do. I really like you metaphor of elementary school being a pond, and French Woods being the ocean, as well as the ending paragraph. Maybe just reference a little more on specific examples of how theatre has hepled you grow physically and mentally, but overall, veryyy gooood!:)

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  2. You write with so much heart, Molly, and i think with your talented way with words, you surely will get into any college you desire. It was a great addition to talk about the struggles you faced because it shows that you are a fighter. It also tells colleges that you will fight for a place amongst its students. And i felt i could relate with you on the camp aspect because there is a camp i go to that has the absolutely same effect on me. This may be by far my favorite out of all the other essays i read. Loved it!

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  3. This is really well written Molly! I like how you used a lot of strong verbs and varied your sentence structure. If I would change anything about it, I would probably try to add in a specific event or a specific part of your theatrical career, instead of just writing about it in general. I thought your essay was really good though :) you put a lot of passion into it. Good job girlll :)

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  4. I think if you could add something about the roles you played or the songs that you have sung that meant a lot to you. Like in the beginning, you open with the one line from the play. You do not need to overdo it in this way, but I do think you want to add just a bit more detail so that your expereince is more convincing and we can witness the transformation as we read the piece. Overall it is solid and organized. Allow it to have a bit more distinguished detail and style. Make it totally yours. - mrs. elmeer

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